Suicide

this is for and the guys and girls lost to sucide

She's sitting in her room

scared and alone

hearing her parents

fight everyday 

Then everything goes silent 

a gun goes off 

she walks to the front 

only to she her parents dead

Now she's sitting there crying 

not knowing what to do 

she picks up the phone 

and calls for help 

They come in 

she's still crying 

they take her away 

to a foster home 

Now she's bouncing 

from place to place 

wanting a home 

to call her own 

She writes a note 

saying she has nobody 

in the world 

she leaves it there on her bed 

She walks 

to the top of the building 

and jumps

She lays there dead 

people screaming all around 

she's in a better place

because now she's with god 

He lives in a home 

full of abuse 

he thinks there's

one way out 

He writes his family 

a letter

gives it to his sister

gets a gun and pulls the trigger 

Now is family's sad 

they never knew 

what was going on 

But now he's gone 

in a better place 

away from abuse 

resting in peace

Reviews

[Heather]

such sad words
this definitely should bring awareness to people especially on this website

[hardscoper6]

That hits hard, suicide has a large impact in my life for many reasons. It really is a sad thing... i really like this poem though, good work!

[TheAdamBryant]

a very sad peom , suicide is such a bad thing

[ScorpioSun]

Very heartfelt, and I liked how it focused more on the peace they finally found, tragic as it is. It also reminded me of a tune I used to love: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EDKwCvD56kw

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[hardscoper6]

wow haven't heard that song in a while, thanks for posting this!