My life

People trying

to tell me what to do

what to wear

how to talk

 

STOP!

it's my life

I'll do what I want

it's my life

 

I want to make my own mistakes

not learn from yours

I'll drink if I want

I'll smoke if I want

 

Don't tell me

what to do

because

I'll only ignore you

 

It's my life

and if you don't like it

then

you can walk out of it

 

because I've had so many

walk out on me

more won't kill me

Reviews

[Chesney W.]

so true,,people are constantly looking at you and I like we are fragile and they want to see what we do when we break. You and I are both stronger than they think. They think we are made of glass when we are actually made of stone. wonderful. people need to butt out of others lives and their decisions and stay to themselves. telling someone what to do 24/7 gets annoying. they think that their opinion is gonna change ours,, but truth be told it aint. we are ourselves, and if others can't except that, then oh well, they are missing the opportunity to be friends with really fun amazing people. It's their own fault when, 10 years down the road, we are high up and successful and they're wanting to be our best friends and we say "you treated us like hell, you wanted me to change who we were" and they are gonna feel really bad then. but as of now, they think bullying is so fun and playing with peoples emotions(people who are already emotionally unstable) is a-okay. but it's gonna be their loss when they regret everything that made us stronger!!
-Chesney Chey :)

[SouthernBelle]

together we can be strong together we will over come anything(:

[Chesney W.]

so true!!!

[Steven Cash]

Smoking

But haven't I read this before?

[SouthernBelle]

idk

[J. Viands]

Beautiful truly a declaration of self honesty is the best tool we have as writers and you used it well

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Sakshi]

Don't tell me
what to do
because
I'll only ignore you

So true!! Hate people who keep nagging or keep telling what to do or what not to do!
Well done GAL :)

[SouthernBelle]

thanlk you

[That_Guy]

Rebellious and relatable, good job.

[Sarah G.]

This is a good poem and you've conveyed an important point! Good work! :)

Typing errors:

-to THE me what to do. (I think you meant TELL)

-walk out on MY. (Did you mean ME)

Other than these typos, this is a wonderful poem! :)

[Sarah G.]

Could you please read THE SUN SHALL RISE AGAIN for me? Thanks! :)

[SouthernBelle]

i sure will and thanks