The Story of me

I'm only me

only one person

only one soul

one heart

 

My hearts been broke

shattered

even ripped out

but I always get it back

 

No I'm not the prettiest

not not smallest

sometimes I'm a b***h

I have bad moods

 

I've been in abusive relationships

I used to cut

I used to pop pills

like they were candy

 

I fall in love

all to easy

and get hurt

all to often

 

I'm from the deep south

I have a accent

I want a truck

I go mud riding

 

I think I might like this dude

but I'm afraid to try

afraid to tell him how i feel

Scared of being alone

 

That's part of my life story

there's more to come as i get older

yes I've had troubles

but my future's bright

 

My life is what i make it

and I'm making the best of it

and I dont care if you want to be there

or not

 

I'll survive

I'll stand strong

and I'll make the best of it(:

Reviews

[Sarah G.]

This is a really good poem! :) I liked the point you made.

Typos and errors:

1)My hearts been broke(n)

2)no[t] not smallest

3)I fall in love
all to(o) easy
and get hurt
all to(o) often

4)SACRED of being alone {SCARED?}

Index:
() = add
[] = delete
{} = suggestion

Other than these few typos, this is a really nice poem! :)

[Cerise]

aww..loved the end...very positive...very well written

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Chesney W.]

nice. be yourself and don't let anyone tell you different. Your story has just started... you have many more chapters to come!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you