Rien
A Poem by kym820
 Describes nothing  © 2008 kym820
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:)) Rien huh ? Well the title is a very strong connection with the poem =D .
A.M.
Posted 16 Years Ago
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Although very artistic, grammer needs fixed a bit. Also I noticed a lot of miss spelled words like hipopotamus, and bake sale. I think you could fix up the middle line, other then that it was well writen. Thsnk you for sharing.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on July 8, 2008
Last Updated on July 8, 2008
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kym820Philadelphia, PA
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I am 55 years old now. I've been away from the writer's cafe for a long time.
The last time I was on here I was 42 years old.
Let's see if I can get back on track with my writing. more..
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