only love

My only love,
you broke my heart,
and took my soul away.
Why'd you tear us apart?
Forever more,
I need you here.
Hold me in your arms,
make the pain disappear.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and sad poem. The flow and the story was very good. Sometime better to be sad then to welcome back people who will only give misery.
Coyote

[Joe]

THis is a good poem. You're rhythm and word choice is really well done. Great job! Keep it up!