Dream?

Dream?

A Poem by Kylie
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Very short poem

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Dream with my eyes open
Sleep when I'm dead
Love who my heart has chosen
Conquer what lies ahead
Choose a potion 
And take the risk of waking dead

© 2013 Kylie


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This piece has alot woven into it's few lines. I caught the images from a country song, and the Incredible Hulk and Romeo and Juliet. =D
It may be short, but it's wonderfully put together and conveys a clear message to live large and keep walking even when the chips are down.

Great Ink!
Aaron - Wolfwind

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kylie

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much! :P That review means alot.



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This piece has alot woven into it's few lines. I caught the images from a country song, and the Incredible Hulk and Romeo and Juliet. =D
It may be short, but it's wonderfully put together and conveys a clear message to live large and keep walking even when the chips are down.

Great Ink!
Aaron - Wolfwind

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kylie

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much! :P That review means alot.

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I love writing about anything! Suggest if you want.. I'm not a very talented writer but I love it so it doesn't matter.. I love music and dancing! more..

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