This One's For You

My heart beats fast my blood starts to flow the clock tick tocks time goes slow,

 

hands are all sweaty, knees weak and shacking, 

my heart is all yours for the taking.

thinking while your lips press up against mine

as you kiss me for the hundredth time

I must still be dreaming, your to amazing to be true 

when ever I look into your eyes i fall deeper for you

the way your eyes sparkle and smile light up the darkest space 

It really lets me know that I'm in the right place.

- Kyle 

Author's Note

Let me know what you think :)

Reviews

[rnuff]

wow so nicely written

[Joseph Aldridge]

Absolutely awesome! What a great poem. I loved how you used imaginary to lighten up your poem and make it seem so real. Really great. That will touch just about anybody's heart. :) And f you have some spare time could you maybe write me a review on some of my work as well? I am also new and I would be so appreciated. Thanks