The Tall Man (Rework #1)

Ever get that feeling your not alone?

From the corners of any room

It lingers about

Slithering from the shadows

When the lights go out

Over your body it looms

 Staring into your dreams

As silent as it is still

Feasting on muffled screams

Lanky and thin

And curious as well

It departs as it arrived

Into the shadows it melts

If the Tall Man stops in

For a meal or for a scare

Hope to never wake up

Or know he was there

Author's Note

Tell me what you liked and didn't like about the small improvements. Rate and review for me!

Kyle~

Reviews

[Nyx666]

I really like this, it gives off that atmospheric feel that you get as a child hearing a about the boogeymen for the first time then not wanting to go to sleep or ever wake up during the night.

[Kyle J. Lawson]

Spooky ain't it? :D