Forgotten with Time

Forgotten with Time

A Poem by Kyle G
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A short poetic tragedy piece I wrote, just came to mind one day..

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I’ve tripped and found myself afraid you’d suddenly sit up, stretch,
and fail to recognize me
I orbited this as a comet does,
drifting aimlessly but with reason.
Our histories trailing behind us,
casting a solar wind of diverse colors on passing fellow orbiting bodies.
The geography telling one story, 
where you saw galaxies,
I saw dust,
as the same with me
though the binding of liveliness
I don’t know the name of the passing systems
but it seems to have been several years of the makeup.
I can lift this bottle to my ear
and all there is to hear
are replicated sights of land filled thoughts.
This place seems always half-imagined.
Even the rocks and water will blur 
when seen through the correct eyes. 
From here,
I understand there is no time
to turn back to the past.
Even though 
I wake in false dawns
Finding everything around me changed,
I still see the single star 
I've discovered bright.
It is an attraction that is true and constant.
Will I be forgotten with time? 

© 2013 Kyle G


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I loved the imagery of the comet that you weave throughout this work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Kyle G
Kyle G

Manteno, IL



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I am 17 years old, and enjoy writing to keep my thoughts under control. Most of my writings are some-what poetic tragedies, I find them the easiest to write due to the reality they bring. If you enjoy.. more..

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