Almost...

Almost...

A Poem by Love-shadowed Silhouettes
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I wrote this last night... I hope you like it.... and I hope I could stop writing these depressing things cuz I'd much rather write about it all working out... or maybe not... ?

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I almost wish

I didn't love him

I almost wish

he'd go.

It's just the pain

is so insane

I'd almost rather throw

my love of him

out the window to

fly through the air,

to get lost among

the leaves and birds

like it was never there.

I wish he'd see

we're meant to be.

I wish he'd know

the way to go.

I only feel

this is much to real.

                             I throb

   I sting

             I break.

 

I bleed.

© 2010 Love-shadowed Silhouettes


Author's Note

Love-shadowed Silhouettes
Let me know what you think... thanks for reading!

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The poem is very good. The line were short and to the point. I like the ending words. The set-up of words made them stronger. Wishes leave us in limbo. Sometime we must take chances. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Love-shadowed Silhouettes
Love-shadowed Silhouettes

Montreal, Canada



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Hey, I'm a teen writer from Montreal. I started writing on this site to promote my blog but then I realised I enjoyed this much more then the blog...:P I've attempted to write a few scripts and scre.. more..

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