Who Am I Really?

A Book by Ky

Kennady, the main character has stronger senses then a "normal" person. She founds out that everthing in her life has been a lie. Her parents were hiding something, and she's going to find out.

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© 2012 Ky

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems. Tell me what you think, and if I should write chapter 1 and so on? Thanks plenty. xx

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saunved

Hi! I read it and it seems good, but it would be fun if you tell "what special senses" does the boy in the story have and how does he use them. There are a few grammar problems but I will ignore. Try to elaborate and expand the story. It seems too simple, or maybe I am not used to your style of writing.
There are places where the story seems a bit rough or abrupt. Tend to that. All the best!

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Posted 11 Years Ago

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You defiantly should, because you never know your powerful senses may guide your imagination when you write more and more about them. You may discover their true purpose! Well done:)

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Posted 11 Years Ago

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saunved

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I would definitely write a first chapter. Your ideas here have a lot of force behind them and this could develop into quite the story. Already have me hooked...

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