aqua and i

this is the first poem i've written that has really made me feel something. so take this how you will it was written about something that happened 10 minutes ago now? i don't care

Aqua & i

Aquamarine, mahogany

The feeling of bare hands on Aquamarine linoleum

Hold my earth in your Eyes

Revolve around me in this one moment

where Aquamarine can meet me for the first time.

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I can understand why this work made you feel something. It is very nicely written and colorful in its colors. The feel of earth and sky dancing with each other. I enjoyed reading this. Continued success in your writing journey.