You Lied

You Lied

A Poem by Toumei
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One broken promise too many. It's one thing to talk about it, but another when it hits you after an accumulation of years and people

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Telling me to wait

Amidst a cold embrace

Soothing, lackluster words to peel the silence

Dazzling display of apathetic empathy

All I desired was to know

You were there

It’s empty

And

Have patience! You take your time

Reveling in the shadows of innocence

Waiting for warmth you hide to radiate from your eyes

Pretending to be in pain

You refuse

What is

Yours

I’m still sitting here

 

© 2008 Toumei


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Truly enjoyed your write, captivated me....thank you!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Nice!!
Excellent word choice.
I like how they are big enough to get
the job done, but not to big to make you
feel stupid turning webster's pages..lol.
Overall it was good. I enjoyed reading this.

BeegE

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on October 17, 2008

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I am, the unloved. The forsaken, forgotten. I am, the hopeful. The dreamer, stoic. I have been given no reason to want, to hope to love to forgive to aspire for And yet, I still remai.. more..

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