snippets

SNIPPET _I

His dull scissors fell from a hand too old.

The red dirt of a village road ahead.

The village barber’s hairs flow in arid air 

 

 

Snippet - II

The inventions of do-gooders to hair, skin, teeth

Even age

Lie on the dressing table with double mirror.

She overlooks

The creeping shadow of time on the pane.

 

Reviews

I like the randomness of it...

[W.k.kortas]

These "snippets" have the feel of haiku/senryu--they are quite visual in that sense, but they have a poginancy that you rarely find in haiku or senryu. Fine pieces of shortverse.

[Steve Thompson]

Interesting style and creative it is, well done.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

This makes me think of Sweeney Todd, the Demon Barber. Great Write.

[A.r. Bazian]

touching!
deep!
oh the age, and the pain upon the hands of time!

very will said!

[Kasey Klein]

A great view within and without the window, my friend