rape of a housemaid

Rape of a housemaid              

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Shadow is touching the tower.

Her way to home is through the park

Butterflied stretches of verdant.

Teasing loneliness taking nap…

Her way back is a length without

Any of the daily clatters.

So they, the assassins of her

Are not known to her consciousness. 

 

Butterflies fly evenly calm

Over an assault, resting in

An innocent green of South Park.

Sun flows with dark blood till birds sleep.

Wake up, humanity alive

Within the uterus of life!  

 

Reviews

[Kasey Klein]

great line:
Butterflied stretches of verdant.

Wonderful images.

[Constance]

Tragic work, and yet still beautiful, because you craft words beautifully.
Thank you.

[Poeticpiers]

sad commentary on what is a common occurrence My friend
I admire your use of the english language which is clear although somewhat stilted

[Carrie Montgomery]

sad end to an innocent life, such a lonely and horrible death.