throbbing twilight

Throbbing twilight

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A throb is coming alive,

It faces the cracked mirror,

And dares the reflection.

Jaded image speaks the tongue

Of an alien invader.

A throb makes me ignore you.

Light and darkness seems alike

Beneath the panes flows a creek.

There rises the body of

Touch me not twilight, still born!

A throb! Oh a throbbing twilight!

                       

 

( and then her innocent palm

touches my temple and thousand

sun is born to allay pains.)  

 

Reviews

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

beautiful! :)

[George Love]

A nice work, well done and well expressed. Not my favorite work, but still good.

[Kasey Klein]

nicely done, my friend

[Sparrow]

Beautiful write :)

[alternative_be]

Very touching, beautiful heartfelt poem!