hotel sea view

Hotel sea view

 

A long walk up the wet sand

Sun on the grains and

Salt in the sky and water.

Hands in the long pockets  

Flare the nostrils.

Air breaths salt. Fresh catches and

Dried sweats in a mingle box.

Smiling offers to

Take you to touch waves of sea

A hotel room of chaos,

Tousled apparels,

And a long face at the end.

A tour of love and quarrels.

 

Reviews

[Sparrow]

Great imagery! Beautiful write altogether. Keep it up :)

[George Love]

You are making me miss the beach!! No fair! Well done, very well written and easy to visualize!

[Imperfection]

Nice imagery.
Well done.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This piece reminded me of my last vacation....and it is graphically very well written...I simply loved the entire visualization and imaginary part in the piece and thus it made me felt like as if I'm present there near the sea and in the hotel room..
So...Its an awesome read overall :)

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Lovely imagery - I feel like I'm at the beach reading this. Wonderfully written, my friend. Nicely done.


Great Write.
Rayne