ascend of a human

Ascend of a human

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A yellow star with love and power shines.

Rays are all I need at this moment of

Cactus grown on the uterus of mind.

To the sun I rise from the sea of white.

Depressions are dense water fathomless.

From my hair the salt of grief dropping still.

Golden sand spreads a promised land to rest.

Nostril flows with light smell of fish and boats.

I remove the embrace of sea-algae.

The sand alone witness the love’s ascend

And, air brings the white cloth as my cover.

                       

Welcome me. I am human again.

 

Reviews

[Touché Armada]

This reminds me of summer just gone, the draining heat and the sun, warm but when it gets too warm to me at least its draining... this summer I took a short break next to the sea, I took a long walk up a mountain and when I came down I went to the beach I could see from that mountain and I walked in clothes and all it was sooo nice, and when I came out again, I felt fresh and new.. Every dip in the ocean or a cool river or lake on a hot day is like a baptism,, not that I ever had a real baptism.. But I'd say its much the same, each time you walk out new, and feel like you might have really touched god.

[T. R. Writer]

This speaks to me of someone being reborn and that in itself can take on a multitude of meanings. Great job!

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Podd-

That sounds much like taking a shower, something that I really need to do after a long day of work.

-Gabe

[jen -- JG]

Welcome-

No matter if this poem is of baptisim, grief, depression or a return to sanity - the uplifting beauty of it is supurb.

from the old to the new - disposing of all the clinging rubbish to emerge clean and fresh to a new you -
a re-birth.

Welcome to the world again. This is perfect!

cheers jen-JG

[deadlife]

earth.deep.deep.and deep.waters.deep.and deep.and then.rise.raising.high.and high.and.I am human again.

a very beautiful piece. stunning.

thanks for sharing it.

[A.r. Bazian]

WOW!
amazing!
how is it that we overlook the miracle of man...
and the beauty of life!
humanity is what sets us apart from the universe!

nice work!
keep it...
coz if you dont... i'm gonna have to shoot you!
:P

[JC Fox]

beautiful poem great job!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

This is stunningly beautiful. What wonderful, vivid and hopeful description you use. Very uplifting and quite miraculous. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

Awesome Write! :)

[E. M. Murren]

Human again and again. Great work. So much meaning in so few powerful words. Cheers.