they arrested Pa

They arrested pa!

 

The storm on the northern sky

He eyes the yellow painted door,

Fingers quivered on touch of

The ancient woods and red bricks.

The crisscross of the net flap

And, the checkered face behind it….

Waiting path on the rolling

Infinity is waiting to

Take him away to the world

That will be his for one year.

 

Reviews

[Kasey Klein]

Simple, soft and natural. Nicely done.

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

well written! :)

[George Love]

Well done!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Nice read and I found the piece very much real.The way you described the entire atmosphere made the piece very much poetic and beautiful..
The metaphor of sky and yellow doors is really tremendous. :)