miscalls

miscalls

                  

You knew his language of miscalls

The rings of love, fatigue, hate and all.

You knew a call at four

Meant at café, four o’ clock.

You knew the miscalls close

Three short rings means

He loved you!

 

Still, can you say at this day of reckoning,

That you really knew him?

 

Reviews

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

great write! :)

[Carrie Montgomery]

do ever REALLY know someone? we only know what someone wants us to know and nothing more. thought provoking, this one leaves a little to the imagination, mysterious.

[George Love]

Very interesting ideas, thoughts and emotions here. Well done

[Kasey Klein]

Nicely done, my friend.

Miscalls, indeed

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Nicely done, I thought about suggesting extending this but maybe its alright the way it is.


Great Write.
Rayne