the bird on the window sil

The bird

 

A bird sat on the windowsill

And saw,

We are running after metals and papers.

A bird never understood.

It flew to eat a nice juicy maggot.

 

Reviews

[Sparrow]

One man's treasure is another bird's trash

[Ahmad Alhour]

Simple & nice...
To me is has some philosophical views...

The bird is some other reality of an other nation among the human race, the bird came to an other nation's windowsill (The Gates Of It's Land)... and found that nation busy, running behind Metal & Papers (The Wealth, And writing it's own historical science to keep it for the coming generation)...

So that bird flew away, looking for food and maggots (Seeking his own advantages on this plain)

Great writing dude...
Good Job, keep up the good stuff...

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Mmmm.... maggots! You are making me hungry. I recently wrote a maggot poem that I will not post for about 10 months. Oh, the glories of the maggot!

Save some metal and paper for me, please. Great write.

-Gabe

[An Ordinary Woman]

This definitely has a dose of imagery with it. I can see the bird and I can see the maggot.

Interesting writing my Dear poddarkushal. :+)

[E. M. Murren]

This is honest and beautiful. The snapshot in time is like a mediation. Fine work.

[Constance]

Simple but profound. You remind me of my friend Dodinsky. I like this very much.