torn pages

Torn pages

 

 

Torn pages from daily dreams and diaries.

They are all scattered on the blue carpet.

Pick up a piece and wet your palm

The color of blue digs deep roots within.

 

A Sunday is emptied out of an old box

A treasure and a ghost roam and their sighs

You can’t wipe, can’t wipe, from your fogging eyes.

 

Time lays loose and you shut in the old box.

 

 

Reviews

[Jestine Beck]

Now THAT is a peice of art! >u<

[~crazy Beautiful~]

i love the imagery in this piece,
the emotions
very interesting to read
Nice work
thank you for entering my contest

[Celtic Cat]

This doesn't come across as happy memories you're digging in, and I had quite the same issue yesterday, if I'm right on that take. Trying to get a monologue written for class....I found some old attempts and resurrected old things I didn't really want to remember feeling. Blue....like blood. I liked this piece and though I may not have decoded it correctly, it still speaks to me and that's good enough on my end....hope on yours as well. Good write.

[deepoet]

Well done

[Emily B]

This has strange and mysterious qualities. I love the images very much.

[T. R. Writer]

I too read this twice and found it to be a rather complex piece despite it's brevity. The images it conjures up are really haunting and I couple almost see the dust settling around me as I read it.

[George Love]

A rather haunting work. Well done

[Blackbirdsong]

This is truly exquisite writing. The first stanza, I could just read and reread that and still glean beautiful images just from those lines. My only complaint - because when I find something I like I always want more - is that you write more on this theme. I'm sure - if you wanted to - you could find all kinds of things to explore here.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is a great piece which is very well written and explained.
This is for me actually a very complex piece with a sense of frustration in it (and that why I read it thrice :D )
A very emotional piece.
Superb read overall! :)

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

great write!