A Truth (For A Changed Friend.)

A Truth (For A Changed Friend.)

A Poem by Kurureenu
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Just something that has been itching at me latly. I wanted to put it into words in a creative manner because that was the only way I could do stuff. If what's-his-face ever reads this, I hope he understands how he has really changed from what he used to b

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No more can I stand to the side.

No more can I watch you fade away.

I don't need to confide in anyone,

Because my choice is already made.

 

I'm taking you back to be my friend.

I'm sitting you down to discuss your new flaws.

You used to be the one I can depend on,

But now your someone who lets me fall.

 

Our past is nothing to care about,

For it is left where it belongs.

Stop leaving me out,

And let me tell you my cause.

 

 

I miss you as my sibling,

Someone who I could talk to.

Now you just refer to something,

That dealt with the me and you.

 

Now it's just me,

Now it's just you.

The past has split,

Into the two that exist right now.

 

Get this and understand.

By ignoring me,

And not treating me as your friend,

Makes you that much less of a man.

© 2008 Kurureenu


Author's Note

Kurureenu
Critics welcom, just don't annoy me. :D

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This was great, you get your point across and it is very firm. You will be able to explain everything, though i have no idea what it is, but you have the amazing ability to express what you feel in words. Awesome write

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Kurureenu
Kurureenu

More-is., IL



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What? Oh yeah... About me. I'm twenty years old now, still writing a lot and dreaming of new ideas as they come. I've written more songs and neglected to put them up. I've also written more stor.. more..

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