Lonely.

Lonely.

A Poem by KurtxCocaine
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Sad2001boys

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What is real and what is not?
Do you love me do you not?
I call back, but you don't answer
Your sweet lips, from this September

My dear Ellie, oh how I miss you
I remember the day that I first kissed you
Held your hand
Kissed your thigh
Oh sweet romance why did you die

I am so lonely.
I cry every time
1 tear
2 tear
3 tear 
Real tears

© 2014 KurtxCocaine


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Bravo!!! This was simply fascinating in the way you brought so much in a few words. I really liked this and could relate to it from past memories of my own... Fall romance meant one thing to you and something different to her.. I love the ending.. Great job...

Posted 10 Years Ago


i actually cried man
i cried 3 tears
3 REAL tears

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wow man this is way too hard to cry wank too

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a sad one. People often go through heartache of this sort. It's a shame things couldn't be easier. Good poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

KurtxCocaine

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate it!

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Added on May 6, 2014
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Tags: Tears, Cry, Sad, Depression, Kill, Beckwith, Lonely

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KurtxCocaine
KurtxCocaine

Melbourne, Victoria (VIC), Australia



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