Random Poem for a Girl Who doesn't matter

Random Poem for a Girl Who doesn't matter

A Poem by Kurt Gargis

You are my everything
    My heart and soul...
    Without you, there would be
    No sun for my eyes
    No air for my lungs
    Or any happiness.

    You are my nothing...
    My nothing of sadness.
    For with you, there is no
    Such thing as sorrow.
    I am ignorant to such things.

    I write this with a heavy heart
    Knowing I am not worthy
    Of your love or affection
    Your tender smiles
    Your joyful laughs, even at my own expense.
    I can only say this:

    Come back to me, my everything...

© 2008 Kurt Gargis


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KGV
Here I go with the most overused phrase on here...wow. This one really touched my heart. I could feel every emotion you put into this.

"You are my nothing...
My nothing of sadness.
For with you, there is no
Such thing as sorrow. "

Brilliant.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I really like this one. Very sweet. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


aw i absolutely loved the last stanza! (but the whole thing was really good)

Posted 16 Years Ago


this poem actually made me cry .
and that's not very easy .
i absoulty love it !


Posted 16 Years Ago



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Kurt Gargis
Kurt Gargis

Arab/Huntsville, AL



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I'm a 19 year old shift manager at an Arby's who is trying to get back to college and hopes to eventually get at least one book published. Check out my book "The Grim Note". Let me know what you think.. more..

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A Poem by Kurt Gargis