Of Fire And Ice

Ice it seemed had filled my heart
his soul drifting farther, and farther apart
cut off from the world, or so it seemed
to this poor man whom had lost everything.

he tells a story of love to pass
love he knew could never last
but the story it seems, is all he knows
he never ever wanted to impose

so he drifts from land to sea
cant you see, that man was me?
but then you came, to light my way
now finally, my night is day
for i thought, you see, that night was always best for me.
but you've shown me how to live
to feel those feelings deep within

like a roaring flame you came
one feirce and wild, yet also tame.
blinded i was by the light you see
for how could one so beautiful come to love me?
but your light has come an cleansed my soul
leaving my feeling slightly whole

my hands that warp around you waist
i must been feeling god's good grace
for how can this angel here you see, ever love a demon like me

Reviews

[theunknownchick]

Cool Poem =) I like the flow

[VintageHottie]

Very beautiful poem!!!
A few typos.
IDK if you ment to put "my" in the first sentence or not, but it sorta clashed a little in the beginning.

"for how can this angel here you see, ever love a demon like me"
I feel that way everyday ;)