Requiem

Night's they pass with out a thought.
while the emptiness inside me fills my heart
choking, gasping, i cannot breath.
depression eating it's way inside of me
This gaping hole inside my chest,
growing bigger and bigger with every breath.

oh, you know, i wish for death.
Anything is better then this never ending hell
Of memories I've come to depend on all to well.
This dagger that lay in my hand
shall know the sweetest taste of man.
again and again it slices through my heart
Slowly yet surely clawing me apart.

pain of flesh, pain of heart
it seems I've all but fallen apart.
but their is no way to win
for you see i am her biggest sin.
Why can't i turn back the hands of time!
to stop me on that foolish day.
god i wish i would have stayed!

No hell compares to this!
The very depths of hell would be more then bliss.
for the hell of the mind, is unlike any other kind.
slowly it devours your humanity,
leaving you on the brink of insanity.
to love is to destroy they've said to me
and it has destroyed me so utterly.
but i know if she were to return
The pain would cease to burn.

For she has showed me the truest love
one that does not compare to another.
Maybe that is why i am meant to suffer...
Alone i am in this world again.
This time, nigh will i contend.
I'll walk along this old dirty road,
looking for that place called home.
but my home is her you see
For she was made for me...

Reviews

[Hannah Monttkomepy]

This was beautiful i loved it. It was so sad and full of emotion. I'm kind of in awe right now. It flowed almost flawlessly and, uh, I really don't know what to say.

Very nicely done. It was spectacular.

[Tate Morgan]

wHAT A WAY TO DIE
tATE

[Ebb and Flow]

Amazing...seems all I can muster at this moment. So powerful. Keeps bringing tears to my eyes.