Giving up

Short yet... Sweet?

Mercy,
grip my shoulders,
push me under,
and let me drown...

Author's Note

Tell me what you think, I want to know. Good and bad. What do I need to work on?

Reviews

[The Watcher]

This is really short, but it still packs a punch. Very intense too. Kudos

[Angela]

Thank you. That is what I was trying to do. (:

[The Watcher]

You're very welcome =)

[Angela]

Super short, but I kinda like that. It makes the piece so much more effective.
So my vote is for 'Good'. :)

[Angela]

Thank you. ♥

You're welcome :)