You Stupid Idiot

A twisted love poem for a boy I'm hopelessly in love with yet I wish to hurt

You call me annoying, a b***h..............HA!!!!!!

Your words are nothing to me, I don't care what you say

What's wrong, a little shocked,

Cause just a few weeks ago I confessed that I love you......

Such a f*****g idiot

Don't try to drift awry, and think I'm easy to fool

I know your trick, so you can lure me into a trap

That I'll always regret.

I rather tear your heart to shreds

Than see us together and fall apart.

First, we fought and cussed each other out

Then we kindly spoke to one another.

I know why you hate me now, and my actions are the reason.

It was just as I planned, there's no stopping me now.

Not when I'm about to finish what I started.

Don't act like you don't know, that's the reason I don't want to be with you.

And don't be pissed off when you know I say the truth

That you're a f*****g idiot!!!!!!!!!

*tears in my eyes* ..........................................

Why don't you prove that you're not an idiot

And notice that I f*****g love you

But that I'm too afraid to let anyone see what I really feel about you.

That's why I lie, I trick, and torture your mind.

I love the way you react, because it keeps you from knowing how I really feel

It's a blessing and a curse for me, but I love to feel the hurt.

Why can't you see through this trick

You stupid idiot.............................

Reviews

[dark_angel]

great job and if its for riku (or i think thats the nickname you told me) i know how you felt when you wrote this master piece. you loved the guy but he was to blind to see how you really felt. to ignorant to know you were there. i should know cause me and you both had it happen to us this year. you with riku, and me with zane.

[Becky C Strukamp]

I feel the surge of one trying to hide a feeling of love by acting as though it wouldnt bother them to be rejected. That kind of feeling is so painful, so emotional, so piercing through the heart. You penned these emotions brilliantly.

[sugar]

ranting i like it, very strong with so much emotion, good job with this

[miguelbovine]

Well?...I have to say this is one of the realist poems Ihave read.it's kind of dark but i like dark.Don't change a thing,I love it!

[brenda]

yeh ! you stupid idiot i know! this poem i can tell it to this guy tht i met but nice write ! i know how this feels like well kinda but nice poem !:)

[Hello, Goodbye]

angst much..lol

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This is a great poem, with a lot of emotion packed into it! I love your expressions of anger and darkness through your writing...I'm all for that = ] Great work!

-Brittany

[ShadowOfTheDay]

Wow very powerful! Good job!(:

[nevermindfan1991]

WOW, this was so powerful, profound, and poignant. This was a great poem to read, I loved every stanza. I had to read it twice, because it was so good. Great poem!