I Love You

A flower can be found in great ruins

I Love You

I Love You

The answer to the conflicts of the world
Ever so powerful, these words be told
This feeling inside burns through the skin
Come hold my hand, you are my queen

To my darkness you bring light
My world you make shine bright
Time goes by unknown
This love is set in stone

Tomorrow is long hours away
In my arms I beg you to stay
There will be a day I fail to tell
My love is true, it will continue

Fear not other troubles
I will protect you from all the rubbles
I’ll soon make you my wife
I will love you until the end of life

Reviews

[Konigin]

This is sweet. :) I liked your flow and you RHYMED!!!! I have always struggled to rhyme, so I think its amazing when someone else does it! ^.^

Wonderful write. :D

[ksscampos]

trust me! I struggle with rhymes also... I personally think the rhymes are no SO important, but the flow it's what makes it better.
(but, I say that because I suck at rhymes....) lol thank you for reading...

[Konigin]

You can't suck... Look at your poem!!! :)

Anywho. Your'e welcome.

[inthe-shallows]

so good & the tone is so desperate, i love it

[Nikki]

>.> Seriously.. Jeebus man.. I swear...
/bow.

[jennifer little]

amazing poem i liked it keep up the good work

[ksscampos]

Thank you... im glad you enjoyed

[jennifer little]

your welcome