Deception

The sun glows

The water sparkles

Where so close

Full of giggles

Does she love me?

She is pregnant

I am happy

I give her a present

she says its crappy

Does she love me?

She has left me

To fend for myself

She took my money

our daughter said farewell

They fled the country

It was all a spell

Does she love me?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Misery]

Dear poet, may I ask about your inspiration for this poem?
Deep down inside what message is the subject of the poem trying to convey?