Mi Amor

Some parts have Spanish to show a certain person that I'm trying to open up and let them see how much I really care.

Mi amor 

Reach for me,

I want to feel you

Caressing me ever so softly.

Llegar más lejos, 

Into my heart, 

Let my love spill into 

Your waiting hands.

Let my warmth 

Fill your soul and 

Bring you to happiness.

Abrázame,

Never let go,

Don't let me fall

Into this unyielding sorrow.

Te amo.

Please, speak these 

Forbidden words, 

Fill me up with the love

We both deserve. 

Let us fuse out hearts together,

And walk across the 

Valley of heartbreak.

Soy tuyo, 

For as long as you want me

I will never leave.

Mi corazón es tuyo mi amor. 

Author's Note

Mi amor means my love. llegar más lejos means reach further. abrázame means hold me. Te amo means I love you. mi corazón es tuyo mi amor means my heart is yours my love.

Reviews

[Cid]

O' there, you prettiest, Krysty!
You just touched my heart by your cold breathing words. First off, thanks for explaining the meaning of some Spanish words into the author's note, it's helped me to understand even helped me to learn some new Spanish words :)
So, thanks!
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The poem you penned's very nice even it's totally an outstanding write cuz, how the love brings the beats of heart damn fast you just poured it into the words even the scent you've left around the poem to let everyone go get lost into the poem with your scent of love to know how the world's balanced with love .. love's what that keeps two souls in one n the two heart as one .. cuz, when we're in love, we always whisper that "If your a heart, am your beat, if your a beat then am your everything!" N much more to express the feels the inner feelings of love, such kinda words we never learn from anybody but from oneself, our heart teaches us this how to express how to whisper and how to make someone safe n happy n so on ... and everything I see in your this poem.
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So, you there, the most prettiest, Krysty ... your very nice at writing, I'd like to say, "keep penning!"

[Krystall]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Cid]

The pleasure's always mine, pretty Krysty!
Well ..the poem's really very awesome n ... n touched the heart cuz the depth of the heart..of the love's into the poem is floating over the words of loves. Today, people rarely understand the meaning of love or the depth of love but by your words, through your this whole poem, it's been sure that .. that, you know, understand the depth of love, you feel the presence of love with heart cuz, you write with the heart, you love with the heart!
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Keep up the great work, Krysty!

[Antoinette]

b-e-a-utiful!! nicely done!

[rottinghexgrl]

This is truly a work of art. I think its wonderfully written and shows the beauty of love.

[Thaddius]

yeah this is raw and beautiful. The intimacy that the bilingual aspect adds is wonderful. The short lines have practically no unnecessary fat. It's also very sensual..

[Krystall]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. The Spanish was a bit difficult to incorporate but I managed.

[Stefanie Holmes]

I love how you added some Spanish flair to your piece. This was unique and romantic. Loved it!

~Stefanie

[Krystall]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you so much.

[A. Amos]

Romance at his best, you made your writing very stylish with adding spanish heading and thanks for giving meaning at the end. You're smart poet and the best part you always write from heart...

[Krystall]

Thank you or your kind words my friend, you too are a very good poet.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome and thank you for your kind words

[narjes]

i loved the inter-usage of languages :)

[Krystall]

Thanks, it was hard to incorporate some Spanish because sometimes it wouldn't flow with the poem.

[Rock]

I like the way you wrote this...very romantic

[Krystall]

Thank you.

[Rock]

You're welcome