Help Me

Help Me

A Poem by Krystall
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A poem I wrote when I was going through chemo therapy, the first letter of each line spells out the words "Help me"

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How did this sickness fall upon me?
Everyone is gone, why am I alone?
Laughter has died, death moves closer. 
Put me out of this misery, I can't take it!
Memories run across my mind, I'm ready to go.
Everything fades away, no more pain. 

© 2014 Krystall


Author's Note

Krystall
This was written about 5 years ago so it may not sound very professional, but it was in my mind at the time.

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Cid
~A life starts n ends into the poem~
You've write something deep, This poem reminds me my old memories either how the happiness comes n fades away from life no one can imagine but when it comes n disappears ... it leaves nothing but the ashes of ..... ashes of memories. A memory that pierces the heart every second to burn the mind to remind some old days n believe that how the time the life the days the minutes're gone from the life for life. Even every day we're living is still becoming memory.
An excellent job, how you create some feelings of past n how you framed 'em all into the words's extremely awesome!
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Keep up the great work, Krysty!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your splendid acrostic brought the writers together to feel your critical situation at the very moments.
Glad to know that the critical situation is over now and you are living happily now.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Krystall

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
zainul

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome.:)
no one can be hide with these pain and misery.
you write it very well, everything would be not professionally dear..
Love this,

Posted 10 Years Ago


Krystall

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Its a tough road but many of us have traveled it...good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Krystall

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
Kristina Kerstein

10 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
The acrostic form is haunting...I can't say that I know how you feel, but I watched my mom go through many of the same emotions. She is here still today and I am glad that you are too! I hope you are doing well. Thank you for sharing something so personal-I think many will relate and know they are not alone on the journey.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Krystall

10 Years Ago

I'm sorry your mom had to go through that and I'm glad she is still with us today, I'm doing fine, t.. read more
I guess was written when your heart was broken? Hope no more issues suxh as above:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


A. Amos

10 Years Ago

Oh I see hope all is good now
Krystall

10 Years Ago

Everything is fine, thank you.
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

Good that's sounded much better

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Krystall
Krystall

Pekin , IL



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Hello, I'm Krystall, the shy girl. I write what comes to mind, I get very discouraged easily but I try to have a positive outlook on most things. more..

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