Death

Just a quick little poem I wrote writing about something pretty controversial in my opinion. Wrote it to just introduce myself a little to how the website works.

Swift movement, yet undetected.

It encroaches, all are selected.

It is not evil, just depicted in an evil way.

No amount of technology will keep it at bay.

 

It is a natural part of our existence

It demands its payment, it is insistent.

It will come sooner or later.

For all living it will cater.

 

Not to be feared, learn its reason.

Yet we despise its brief season.

Not wanted, yet needed.

No matter how, all will be treated.

Author's Note

I am not a big fan of the last part too much, but I thought it worth adding.

Reviews

[Lizardo]

I can clearly see the messages, I like the poem,
my favorite line:
It is a natural part of our existence

It demands its payment, it is insistent.

It will come sooner or later.

For all living it will cater.
a good pice of work

[Beacon]

Thank you very much. I am glad you can see what the meaning was. I don't know why but I tend to have better parts towards the middle of my texts rather than either end.

[Laura Lynn]

is this a riddle? I can't figure it out, could be this website portal I suppose but there seems to be more to it than that

[Beacon]

I believe you're seeing all of it, I like to keep things simple at times. I'm sorry if you don't understand, the poem is essentially just about how death is eternal and a natural part of life. I realize it could be a bit convoluted, i'll try to be better at this in the future.