Reflections in the ink

Inner musings. Like worded expressions!

Spilled ink on to the paper
reflect, color-splattered walls
Shapes, irregular-forms caper
as feelings unruly, hover tall!
Erratic moods shadow-cast
however could read them all..

My ink enamored eyes now find
more depth, in the reflections cast!

Author's Note

This is my way of portraying how I find a written story has more depth and so is easier to appreciate when the hidden layers to it are worded compared to the story we seem to see in front of us! Just my pov!

Reviews

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Very interesting.

Just like reading between the lines.....reading a story or poem and looking for the deeper inner meanings behind it.

You have expressed your idea very well. Beneath the splatters of ink and shadow lies an inner truth, the founding emotion behind a piece of writing.

Neat work. Nicely done.

[Krutika]

Thank you. I unknowingly always end up trying to decipher the understated meaning behind a piece of writing. Every writing I read feels just emotionally rich and complex. I play detective for a while 😎😁

[Suhd]

A very fine piece of art. So much depth and expressive enough to associate with the feeling it conveys.

[Krutika]

Thank you for visiting and for your kind words. :)

[Inject Positivity]

Thank you for your author's note. Hm... Now I see what you wanted to tell us mate. I believe every piece of writing no matter long or short, has a deeper level of meaning and they always carry their meaning if the rightly selected words are used. I find most of your poems full of excellent words, which actually helps the reader to read it in a more intense yet enjoyable way. This one too has great flow, except the last two lines which I'm sure you did intentionally to make a difference.

[Krutika]

Yes.. the last two lines were intentionally out of rhyme coz that's how reflections are.. they appear blur and not so beautiful compared to original.. Yet they have much depth and ability to pass through darkness of the ink and still retain its hue!

Again thanks for your valuable input :)

[Isabella Ivy]

I really like this. The reader can see how you create by this description. It's also a good poem. I would suggest reworking the last so the rhyme fits the first three in the sequence. Good write! I.I.

[Krutika]

Thanks Isabella for such an encouraging review😊
About the last line..I intentionally kept the last two lines out of rhyme to emphasize them a bit. But I will heed your advice in my future work!
Happy Writing :)

[Isabella Ivy]

The author is always right! lol. And now I see what you were doing. Good :) Maybe setting them down one space then, would cause your intention to be apparent to the reader, and not like they just stumbled across an error(?) Happy writing to you as well, dearest! I.I.

[Krutika]

Haha.. Yes I agree I should have put a line break there.. my bad😌
Thanks for your valuable review!

[Isabella Ivy]

It's great! I wouldn't have known. It's always an experiment! You build a poem like anything else. I'm always changing things to work better and sometimes another eye sees what I can't! All fun :) I.I.

[Krutika]

Yeah.. True that😊👍