It's Okay

It's okay if you don't like me
It's okay if you don't agree with me
It's okay if you find flaws in me
It's okay if you choose a path
not same as me..

Know that I don't blame you
Know that it doesn't bother me
Know that it makes me happy
Knowing that I have a reason to go
looking for you..

Cause you are free to wander
wherever your path takes you
Cause you know what, I will
find you, with a tale not one
but two.. yours and mine!

---Fate (the narrator)

Author's Note

Thanks for reading :)

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Cause you are free to wander
wherever your path takes you
Cause you know what, I will
find you, with a tale not one
but two.. yours and mine!"

I liked this stanza the best. Although at the start it seems like a regular heart break tale, the end changes the perspective. I enjoyed reading this. Nicely penned. 👍

[Krutika]

Thanks.. I like to deceive with my first stanza.. That's the case with most of my writing 😁
Always intended this lines with respect to Fate's pov..
Glad you liked it.. and thanks for reviewing it :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I noticed that..
You're welcome! A pleasure 😊

[Sofia]

I didn't imagine the ending like this.. what a twist!! In most of ur writings there are twists at the last nd that's what i like the most..its almost like an unexpected ending..i loved it..😊

[Krutika]

It's good to know that you enjoy twists as much I love to write them ;) Thanks for reviewing :)

[Sofia]

You're welcome😊

[Surya]

I will find you, It's okay,....haha, I enjoyed it....simple yet determined determination in a willful manner...:)

[Krutika]

That's how fate is. It will find an individual no matter which path is chosen. I appreciate your kind words :)

[APOORVA]

awesome is the word.
Its okay... :)
wow how deep

[Krutika]

Thanks Apoorva :) It's nice to have you review it! Glad you liked it! Happy reading!

[Saddam]

Simple but Effective.
This is what I want to say.
Thanks.

[Krutika]

Thanks for your review :)

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Love this! Great job, really catches the attention and brings a great ending

[Krutika]

I am thankful to you for taking time to review it. Thanks for reading :)

[Isabella Ivy]

I really like the end of this poem: 'A tale not one, but two. Yours and mine' Blessings :) I.I.

[Krutika]

I most likely find myself trying to personify abstract ideas. Fate is one of them and that's why Fate's pov :) Thank you!

[Isabella Ivy]

I guess that's a poet's job! You will do well :) I.I.