Carnival

Carnival

A Poem by Krutika
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Carnival for me is associated with an infinite joyous feeling. It is a painting of an unbounded energy that convey serenity at heart!

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Dazzling lights shimmer
awhile, at a distance
Bursting fireworks crackle
with flair and flamboyance

Colored confetti flutter
doing a wayward prance,
Frosted chocolate melts
lost in a subtle savoury trance!

Flamenco near the firelight
entwined embers, an exquisite dance
hearts aloft meander
chronicling the carnival motif, perchance!

© 2017 Krutika


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Krutika
Thanks for reading.

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A beautiful imagery is created through your words. Keep it up.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Krutika

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :) :)
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Beautifully penned! Congratulations :) I.I.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Krutika

7 Years Ago

Thank you.I appreciate your review very much. :)
Isabella Ivy

7 Years Ago

You are most welcome! :) Blessings, I.I.
Frosty chocolate and flamingos... Oh wait... No flamingos... Sparkling visuals, and neon laced metaphors dance about in this amusing ride... Flamboyantly penned...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Krutika

7 Years Ago

For me carnival is not just an event but a feeling. As all feelings go, it is indefinite.. So it ca.. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Aye, I agree, well then... Maybe just one flamingo... You are most welcome...
The word 'carnival' is something that brings images of happiness and joy. And one can look through the words and lines of your poem the joy that is glowing and flowing... Spectacular word choices and presentation...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Krutika

7 Years Ago

Glad that you enjoyed the joyous carnival spirit as much as I did writing it. I appreciate your kind.. read more

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Added on February 26, 2017
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