Lonely car drive

Found myself humming sth similar yesterday. Love is where the ego steps out & the heart steps in. And the heart is superior for it's inherently pure & sacred. unconditional love purifies the heart.

my heart's not made of stone

but it can't be broken for sure

made of love; i've only love to give

every time you hurt me babe i'll forgive

i find peace in a lonely car drive 

you being in the back of my mind

i feel our love is more than alive

i don't need ya' presence when ya on my mind

babe we're gonna have the time of our life

when you have me singin' for you tonight

for if you know you've got my heart come alive

and gave me every reason to feel it's right

it's time...

car drive (all alone)

car drive (i'm not alone)

car drive (all alone)

car drive (i'm not alone)

Author's Note

Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very nice indeed, well done :D

[Dayran]

A heart that is made for love when it has a mind to talk to. Nice write!

[DeliriousCerises]

This is crazy, just the other day I was wondering the difference between a poem and a song, and here it is. When I read this, music came into my brain and it was chugging along through your poem, read with rhythm. I've never been able to write a song, so I can't give much criticism, just praise, but good job.