Time to revive objectivity

Time to revive objectivity

A Poem by Kruppz
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Objectivity is attainable for every individual. I'm striving to be.. But have to learn their ways to understand 'em better for my own rational self-interest.

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words, were they ever uttered as a means of articulate exchange?
words, now become a means of mean people to meet their ends.
words- precursor of contention
words- often taken for granted
words- open for interpretation
words- misused, misinterpreted
words- weapons of destruction

words no longer a language of candid?
can any shred of honesty left stand it?
people, should I re-learn how I view I view your world?
people, should I prefer to hear or listen to your words?
people, should I rather dismiss your words as noise?
people, should I rather look into your vieled eyes?
people, should I rather read your covert body signs?
people, should I rather that all's wrappers to your lies?
people, should I before I leave your side think thrice? 

© 2011 Kruppz


Author's Note

Kruppz
Nothing left open for interpretation hopefully. Personally I won't rate it above 30/100. Critique.

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When I read this, it reminded me of a journal entry I wrote once when I was about 14 or 15 in junior high. When words had become meaningless, something used so people could hear themselves, or trick themselves. I had contemplated becoming a mute. I had questioned whether words were really used to convey a meaning of thought, or to define ourselves and prove we exist. Did we say things because it was what we thought, or because it was what we thought we were suppose to say, because it was how we thought we were suppose to act. I think my favorite line is "people, should I prefer to hear or listen to your words?" That's such a powerful difference to make.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved the way you used words in your poem. Truly delight to read.
I honestly think this one blew my mind with thoughtfulness. The questions applied were true to roots.
Nicely written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Unique and original, "veiled eyes?"

I enjoyed some of the concepts and sentiments in this though, a certain deconstruction of meaning which I found witty.

I request you to write a poem about body-piercings and tatoos.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You have a brillaint way of thinking...deep and profound....great for my brain cells to read this....

Posted 12 Years Ago


An attempt to test the validity of one's own truths. We are compelled to such things in the ages of the world when the change and transformation overwhelms the mind. A poem about a start.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 28, 2011
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Kruppz

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