Incentive

manipulate vs. encourage

“Come my daughter

Come to me baby

I give you a push

And you discover

what life should be”

 

“……..but father,

I can’t see thee”

 

 

 

Author's Note

open for interpretation

Reviews

[Dayran]

Stay away from the manipulative, whether you interpret it in others or in your own best intentions. It doesn't work anymore, too many different interpretations as to intent. Nice write!

[Tai Ryens]

My interpretation would be of a daughter that is lost in life, not that 'where the hell do I go?' lost, the kind of lost where you kind of feel like just giving up. In those times, sometimes a little shove can get us back on our feet again. When she says the last two lines, I think of it as she's so lost in life that she can no longer see the track of it.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

My interpreation would be, daughter not ready enough to discover yet, the world....
Love it xD