Break my Fall

inspired to some extent by Regina Spektor's Fidelity

     F  

  B---r---e---A---k       my

        L

          L

            .

              .

                .

Author's Note

It's a secret saved for the one who can melt my heart that happens to be made of stone.

Reviews

[Dinesh Sairam]

I'm a long-lost stranger to digital poetry (I've seen quite a few in this site too). I'm like an old timer, who feels words need no decoration other than what they express. But sometimes, very creative pieces like this make me- at least doubt my notion. Kudos.

Keep writing.

[Luke Sampson]

Smart! =] I'm a fan of individualism. Good way to show it!

[Dayran]

Interesting!

[Tai Ryens]

What a creative style for three words, but I wouldn't really classify it as a poem. It's more of an art, something that should be painted on a mural. Great job though.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Excellent creative style, awesome...