Ever Enough

All I had to offer.

To the guy for whom I wasn't 

smart enough,

pretty enough,

tall enough,

cool enough,

hot enough,

wasn't my love enough?

Author's Note

Thanks. :)

Reviews

[Augustus]

I like the use of the rhetorical question here. It makes the poem, short and sharp. The subject matter isn't new. But I like the way you pose the question. It conveys the intensity and the indignation admirably. In an ideal world, you wouldn't have had to write this. But this world is far from ideal. And so we seek solace... in words...Keep writing!

[MadalaJose]

This is a seriously awesome poem, I enjoyed. The style, the flow, the diction: on point. and very true also: satisfaction. Guy sometimes can be unreasonably demanding. nice work

[Acropolix]

It's the ever present struggle of true love. Where do we speak of infatuation and lost, and where does it become love? Moreover, love must come from both hearts. It's unbearable to watch the unrequited lover be left alone with hope and emptiness.

[Baby Ricochet]

I think it's enough ...........