Burned

Love being used and getting burned

You hurt me,

And I fell so hard.

It feels like I'm dying,

Just laying here in this yard.

 

I love you,

I gave you my all.

You used me,

Then you didn't even call.

 

I thought that everyone was crazy,

But I was wrong.

They told me to move on,

And quit listening to a sad song.

 

I feel used,

I feel betrayed.

I need to move on,

And it can't be delayed.

 

I want to destroy things,

Until I see my blood.

Then I'll keep going,

Till it causes a flood.

 

I would of given you everything,

I was the best.

But you made your mind,

So I fall like the rest.

 

You will get hurt,

You will want to come back.

But my answer is "NO",

And for now that is a fact.

 

I was looking for love,

Then I got burned.

It's all thanks to you,

That my personality was turned.

 

I'm tired of indecision,

I'm sick of playing your games.

So I'll go to hell,

And bathe in it's flames.

 

After reading this,

You will want to call me on the phone.

But don't,

Cause I just want to be left alone.

Reviews

[dw817]

What do we all want out of love ? While we might like to believe everyone wants the same - no, they don't. Each of us are unique and individual to ourselves and as such we have our own interests and appetites.

Here's hoping you find your way through the storm of emotion and can make amends ...

[Krosis]

thanks. that means a lot right now. this is the most recent poem I wrote. I have quite a bit more from before. I'll put them up when I get the chance.

[dw817]

Well be happy wherever your lifepath leads you. And I'll certainly be looking in on your works. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"I'm tired of indecision,

I'm sick of playing your games.

So I'll go to hell,

And bathe in it's flames."

I felt the pain , the anger and the burning...Bravo....................

[Aguilar]

Amazing truly emotional and I totally can relate to your poem