The Monster In The Hospital

A man who wakes up in a abandoned hospital and then encounters a monster. Will it end well for him? or will it end badly..

My mind starts to wander, who am I? What am I? Where am I? What happened to me? My eyes flutter open, I'm in a hospital room, “Weird.” I thought to myself. “Hello?” I spoke calmly. I rub my eyes. I get out of the hospital bed and I look down and see that I'm in a blue and white hospital gown, I head out of the room, as my eyes adjust to the light I blink a couple of times, I start to hear whispers and murmurs, I don’t  see anyone that could possibly be doing that, “Am I going crazy?” I muttered under my breath, I sigh. “I must be hearing stuff.” I grumble and walk around. “Hello? Is there anyone who can help me? I think I’m lost.” I called out, no one answered, I started to panic and ran around “Someone!? Please! Help me!” “Hello.” A voice called out as I whipped around. “Hi?! Who’s there?!” My voice was filled with fear and panic as the lights flickered, I rushed towards where the voice came from “Help me! Please! I’m afraid!” “Don’t worry, I'll help you.” The voice was raspy, like it never spoke in a hundred years, I slowed down my pace. “Who are you?..” I cried out in a wary-like panic. "That.. doesn't matter." It growled, like it was hungry. "Then what- what will I call you?.." I said, fear still lingering in my voice. "Amon. Call me Amon." The lights flicked. I saw the outline of Amon's body, my eyes widen from how tall, skinny, how malnourished it looked, I felt like screaming, but I stayed quiet, I don't know why.. I should've screamed in terror of how Amon looks. "O-Okay.." I said in a slight whisper and looked down. "Good." Amon made a low rumbling sound that almost sounded like a full on beast growl. "Follow me, mortal." The way Amon said "mortal." made a shiver go up my spine and it wasn't in a good way.. I feel scared, I feel like hiding. I feel like I should run but I keep standing in place, afraid. Amon looks down at me like a predator hunting its prey. I stare up at Amon, locking eyes with Amon. Amon's eyes darken with hunger. "Come on, mortal." He walks into the darkness of the hospital. I followed, thinking he'd take me to a safe place. I was wrong, so terribly wrong.. He leads me to a room, a empty, cold, rusty room. The smell, it was horrible. it was like something or millions of things died in this very room. "345." Amon grinned, showing his yellow, razor sharp, shark like teeth. I screamed in fear and backed up. "NO- NO PLEASE! DON'T KILL ME! I HAVE A FAMILY!" My screams echoed throughout the room. Amon kept grinning ear to ear. Amon tackles me, he tears my limbs off. I sob. My bloodcurdling screams fill the the room. "NOOO!! AMONN- PLEASE! STOPPP!!" He doesn't stop. There was a pool of blood around me. Amon crawls to the corner and eats my limbs, he picks my skin off and then eats my skin. I was still screaming, I wish I was already dead. Amon laughs manically. He walks back over and rips me open. He eats my insides violently, he slurps my organs up like it was his last dinner. He rips my head off and then it all goes black.

Author's Note

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