Making Love

 

"Making Love "

 

 

The feel of your soft touch,

makes time stand still.

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With just one kiss, I melt like chocolate,

sitting in the hot sun.

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We start to get all hot and heavy,

as we move towards the bed.

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And as we take off eachothers clothes,

I wisper, ohh baby give me more.

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So upon the bed you sofely lay me,

with your hand behind my head.

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I Kiss your neck, and you kiss mine,

sending tingles through out my spine.

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Being this close, makes us feel as one,

getting lost in eachother until we are done.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[MIB]

Very nicely written... your words describe it lovely, and the last line is really romantic ... getting lost in each other until we are done... excellent work keep it up ;)

[~LadyWolf~]

:) Thank you very much for reading and injoying my poem!