Pride Of The Pack

I look at you through the windows of the dark,

You sneak a peak of my eyes in the sheath,

Now look its trouble when you feel,

The moment just heightens.

Am here to feast.

 

My entire pack are demons,

But the most protective monsters.

We'd kill for a friend or a brother.

Are sadistic maniacal behavior,

Leaves you breathless,

And now you shutter.

Stand still,

We got your scent!

 

Don't be afraid, it will be swift,

Like a blink, it will all be over.

Set aside your prejudice,

My honor is what causes my eyes to glimmer.

Body of a predator,

Heart of a solider.

We hunt for all and not for one.

 

Are intelligence eclipses all,

Though you may wonder what our interests encompass.

Not math nor literature we cannot compose.

But the soothing melody of death.

Family means the most to us all,

Though we fight just to be alpha.

 

We are nor monsters than you are human.

While your society is dog eat dog.

Not knowing that our kind hurts no member.

Survival is group effort.

I wish i had the heart of a wolf.

Live breathe air as a wolf in prime.

Young alpha roaming the lands.

Howling as night time comes.

Only to grip your heart like my prey!

Reviews

[Pi Cee]

I like your writing, its not bad, but to me, its a bit bland...=/ to be completely honest. You know what you want to write, you have it down, but I think you could add and cut some things to make it more....poetic?
Just what I think, feel free to ignore it.


-Pi Cee

[Kriston]

I would like to hear your reactions, your aspirations and you expectations of myself. Its the only way I may become better. Thanks in advance for taking the time to read my work.