Elisa

Dedicated to a very close friend of mine.

Elisa

"Ever felt like you need someone to define you?"

                                                                                       -Elisa Hamilton

She sings to me through words I can’t believe,

Songs of better days and things I can’t perceive.

Blue feathers fall from up above like raining kites,

She tells me to stay strong,

But she can’t take her own advice.

 

Pull with me to cut the endless rope,

The noose that sways you breaks to give you hope.

 

You’re pineapple-shaped bubble deep under the sea,

Your wingless angel told me you wish to be free.

 

I see into your soul though I can’t see your face,

I hear your voice through words from lines you’ve left untraced.

 

Let my words wash over you.

Define you.

Reviews

[stars are far]

That was very beatiful work youve done here.. keepit up

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Thank you so much.

[Jennie Baron]

Indescribably beautiful words and a song-like feeling. I'm happy to have read this. Artistic and creative!

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Thank you. I'm always happy to have heard from you.

[Riley Justine]

Gorgeous poem. Simple and fluent. Awesome job on this

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Thanks a lot. It truly does mean a lot.

[Mila]

Congratulations on winning the Need Reviews? IV contest!

This was very beautifully written, and I enjoyed every word!

-Mila