Cold Caress

Cold Caress

A Poem by Kristan A. Mohammed


She is a journey,


Without a destination.


Internal malady,


Of silent self-destruction.


 


Tell her you love her,


Then lie and burn to waste.


Give her a reason to believe,


Just a little taste.


 


She is the ice that breaks under your feet,


Your fantasy she lives to please.


The tale that lurks in bondage underneath,


She is your vital remedy.


 


Tell her you love her,


In hopes that she might fall.


Give her a reason,


To fall for it all.


 


A call to the fires,


To fall and burn the ice.


Hearts remained broken,


Can’t heal more than thrice.


 


Snow White comes with frostbite,


She will break your heart.


Beauty comes in blind sight,


She planned it from the start.


Offering her shoulders,


For you to shed your tears.


Her shoulder is so cold,


You’ll get icicles on your ears.


 


She’s frozen,


She threw the dice so you’d get hurt.


She broke you,


But what was it all worth?


 


And she’s alone now.


© 2015 Kristan A. Mohammed


Author's Note

Kristan A. Mohammed
About a woman who got tired of feeling pain and started inflicting it.

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I love this poem!!

It begins so evil as if it is the author playing the game, he is in control but the poem grips and twists you around to her being the heart breaker.

"Her shoulder is so cold,

You’ll get icicles on your ears."

Beautiful line - You kept the flow going and each verse interesting throughout wonderfully written I really enjoyed this!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kristan A. Mohammed

9 Years Ago

Thanks. I so happy you enjoyed it. After all, that's all I ask.

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Added on January 27, 2015
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Kristan A. Mohammed
Kristan A. Mohammed

Arouca, Caribbean, Trinidad and Tobago



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I am trying to uncover the enigma of the human emotion through poetry and other forms of writing. I think that the human mind and emotion is quite interesting to i have based my inspirations on it. more..

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