I'd Love You If I Could

I'd Love You If I Could

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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This is a song I wrote awhile ago about a guy who liked me that I kinda liked back but I just couldn't really be with him. I hope you like it! The hidden message is: I just don't want to hurt you <3

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I'd Love You If I Could
You spent a whole year,
Watching the way I walk,
And hearing the words I talk,
While I was clueless,
And facing the other way,
When there was some guy,
Who caught my eye,
I left you in the dust
Well baby I'd love you if I could,
But I just can't force my heart to a place,
Where it doesn't want to go,
Well I don't want to hurt you,
Like the way that he hurt me,
You swear I won't,
But honey I do know,
Well baby I'd love you if I could
When he was gone,
And left me lost,
You helped me find,
My piece of mind,
And when I'm lost in a song,
You sing me a melody,
But they never seem,
To be about you
Well baby I'd love you if I could,
But I just can't force my heart to a place,
Where it doesn't want to go,
Well I don't want to hurt you,
Like the way that he hurt me,
You swear I won't,
But honey I do know,
Well baby I'd love you if I could
Well baby I don't wanna,
Hurt your feelings,
Or ruin our friendship,
But you don't seem to understand,
You say you'd give everything,
To be a part of me,
But I feel like no matter what,
All I would think about is him
Well baby I'd love you if I could,
But I just can't force my heart to a place,
Where it doesn't want to go,
Well I don't want to hurt you,
Like the way that he hurt me,
You swear I won't,
But honey I do know,
Well baby I'd love you if I could <3

© 2012 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
Heyy :) So I wrote this song a while ago after my first boyfriend broke up with me. This guy started liking me at the beginning of last year, well now it'd be two years but ya. After a while he still liked me but I liked this other guy and dated him and sort of forgot about the guy who liked me. After we broke up I was kinda lost and the guy still liked me but I felt bad because it seemed like I kept leaving him to be with other people and this song was kind of me telling him that I couldn't with him because I was always afraid that I would hurt him like the way my ex broke my heart. Turns out a long while later... I dated him.... didn't really work out well :/ butttttt I'll have more songs on that later :) haha! Hope you like it!

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Wow, I can totally relate to this! Anytime another guy would start to like me, I'd like him back but my ex would always be in my thoughts. It made everything worse and hard for me for awhile anyway. I do think you have a talent from God for writing epic songs! :D Just putting that out there. Haha! I wish I could do that. I especially like the repeating stanza, which I think is the chorus.. But anyway, it's beautifully written. I enjoyed this and added it to my favorites :)


P.S.- Will be reading and reviewing more of your work! You're an excellent writer. Never give up what God's possessed you with :)

Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it and you can relate :) That's why I write music and stuff so tha.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

12 Years Ago

You're welcome no problem :) and that's good that you see it like that.



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Wow, I can totally relate to this! Anytime another guy would start to like me, I'd like him back but my ex would always be in my thoughts. It made everything worse and hard for me for awhile anyway. I do think you have a talent from God for writing epic songs! :D Just putting that out there. Haha! I wish I could do that. I especially like the repeating stanza, which I think is the chorus.. But anyway, it's beautifully written. I enjoyed this and added it to my favorites :)


P.S.- Will be reading and reviewing more of your work! You're an excellent writer. Never give up what God's possessed you with :)

Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it and you can relate :) That's why I write music and stuff so tha.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

12 Years Ago

You're welcome no problem :) and that's good that you see it like that.
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Sam
Wonderful song, wish I could write songs as good as you. Haha

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful krista

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Krista Weiss

12 Years Ago

Thanks :) haha I think you know who this one's about haha... awk lol
CarlyRhymes

12 Years Ago

no i have absolutely no idea. -,-
Very cool, sadly been thousand of times the guy that song could be addressed to :(

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so good! I'd kill to be able to write songs like you! Great song!!! X3

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awwwwww i feel the same way right now

Posted 12 Years Ago


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