Good Luck Darling

Good Luck Darling

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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After my boyfriend and I broke up, he started to like a new girl. So this is the song that I wrote for it. The hidden message is: He tricked me too. <3 Hope you like it!

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Good Luck Darling
Baby, don't you know,
I'm okay with it,
You can have her all you want,
Cuz it really don't matter anymore,
We're over, we're done,
And everyone but me has moved on,
But that don't mean you still can't find love,
So all I've got to say to you is
Good luck darling,
I can see it in your eyes,
That you love her,
But she's really got you mesmerized,
So you can have fun with her all you want,
Cuz I know it'll never be me again,
All I know is she's a piece of work,
So good luck darling
You think everything will be perfect,
You think he'll be your prince charming,
But soon you'll realize he's not,
He's just a piece of work,
So as a heads up,
Run as fast as you can,
Cuz soon he'll break your heart,
So get ready for the pain and
Good luck darling,
I can see it in your eyes,
That you love him,
But he's really got you mesmerized,
So you can have fun with him all you want,
Cuz I know it'll never be me again,
All I know is he's just a jerk
So good luck darling
Now I can feel the jealousy kicking in,
It's making my head pound and spin,
Haven't you figured out that I want you back,
I knew that you two wouldn't work out,
Cuz all you guys did was scream and shout,
Didn't you know that I was the one,
But you blew it all away,
For some reason I want you back to stay
Good luck darling,
Can't he see it in my eyes,
That I still love him,
But he's really got me mesmerized,
So I can get things back to where they started again,
But I know he won't want me again,
All I know is he'll be a jerk,
So good luck darling <3

© 2012 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
Hope you all like it! And don't criticize that I still liked him even though he's a jerk... I wasn't very smart last year :P I've learned my lesson though haha

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I really liked reading this! It was like listening to a song, and it had great lyrics. A job well done, and I can also relate to this. Great job! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I get what you mean!

this poem is so realistic, it portrays a story that many can relate to, I really liked this one.

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